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1、职高高考英语作文应试技巧职高高考英语作文应试技巧职高高考英语作文应试技巧房县职业技术学校李军【摘要】以前英语作文评分依据是根据要点和语言准确度而定，但近几年要求“使用较多语法结构和词汇”，因此要想得高分，除了要点和语言准确度以外，还必须在较复杂的句子结构或较高级的词汇上有所表现。句式单一，缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分，相反“有些错误，但是为了使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致”，给分档次仍在最高档(2125分)。【关键词】复杂句子高级词汇卷面每次给学生评讲作文，笔者总把学生的作文比作前去求职的“面试者”，而改卷老师就是那前去招聘的“考官”，“考官”面对成千上万面试者，不一会就因枯燥

2、而疲惫不堪，如何让你这个面试者给考官留下好的印象而打高分呢？那只有你这个面试者必须要有出众之处，让“考官”眼前一亮，自然你的分数就会让你也眼前一亮。如何让你这个面试者有出众之处呢？职高的学生，整体的作文都不好，如果你的作文错误较少，就会显得非常好了，如果你再能用几个复杂的句子，高级的词汇，那你就会很出众了。笔者把它具体归纳如下：一、一篇好作文总体要求：1、一个漂亮引人的开头。例如：【原文】Imagirl,Im18yearsold,Ilikedancingandsinging,IwillgraduatefromFangxianVocationaltechnicalschoolthissummer

3、.【修正】I,an18-year-oldgirl,whoamfondofdancingandsingwillgraduatefromFangxianVocationaltechnicalschoolthissummer.2、2-3个复杂句子，3-4个高级词汇的正文。3、一个正确无误的结尾。4、一个整洁美观的卷面。二、复杂句子书写的常见方法，也是得高分的“亮点”。1、灵活运用多种句式。运用主从复合句：定语从句、宾语从句、主语从句、同位语从句。原文IdolikejoiningintheEnglishCorner.Itwasbuiltthreeyearsago.修正Idolikejoiningint

4、heEnglishCornerwhichwasbuiltthreeyearsago.运用倒装句。如:原文InotonlylearnEnglishinclassbutalsolearnitinmypart-time.修正NotonlydoIlearnEnglishinclassbutalsoinmypart-time.运用强调句原文Wefeltveryveryhappywhenweweretogether.【修正Wedidfeelveryhappywhenweweretogether运用分词短语作状语。如:原文WeoftenpractisespeakingEnglish,changeouride

5、as,talkaboutourfavouriatesportsandsoon.修正WeoftenpractisespeakingEnglish,changingourideas,talkingaboutourfavouriatesportsandsoon适当使用被动语态原文OurschoolheldanEnglishCornerthreeyearsago.修正AnEnglishCornerwasbeingheldinourschoolthreeyearsago.运用由with或without引导的短语。2.通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力.原文Wecanlearnspoken-Engl

6、ish.Andwecantalkaboutinterestingthings.WealsotalkaboutlearningEnglishexperienceandso修Wecanlearnspoken-English,talkingaboutinterestingthings,English-learningexperienceandsoon.3.学会使用过渡词。如:递进:then然后，besides还有，moreover此外，furthermore而且等。转折:however然而，but但是，onthecountry相反，afterall毕竟等。总结:finally最后，atlast最后，

7、inconclusion最后，inbrief总之等。强调:indeed确实，certainly一定，surely确定，aboveall尤其三、如何使用”高级词汇”:1.使用词组、习语代替单词。如:原文IlikeEnglishCornerverymuch.修正Iamkeenon/fondofEnglishCornerverymuch.2.使用一些很有“洋味”的单词。如:原文Anumberofstudentsalljoinintheactivitiesactively修正Manyastudenttakesanactivepartintheactivities.3.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:原

8、文Wepracticespoken-English,talkaboutsomethinginteresting,weoftentalkaboutourexperience,too.修正Wepracticespoken-English,talkingaboutsomethinginteresting,sharingourexperience,too.四、例文修改介绍你们学校的情况：这是一所中等职业学校，有40多年的历史，许多毕业生都已成名。全校有39个班，1600多学生，教职员工（faculty）近200人。校园很大而且美丽，四周绿树环绕。有一座图书大楼，两座教学楼，一个大操场。老师对学生要求很

9、严格，学生很尊敬老师。Ourschool（原文）Ourschoolisamediumvocationalschool.Ithasmorethanfortyyearshistory.Manygraduatescomefromourschool,theyareveryfamousnow.（修改）Ourschoolisasecondryvocationalschoolwithamorethan40-yearhistory.Manygraduateswhocomefromourschoolareveryfamousatpresent.（原文）Thereare39classesinourschool.T

10、henumberofthestudentsis1600.Andtherearetwohundredteachersandworkersinourschool（修改）Thereare39classesinourschool.thenumberofthestudentsis1600,andnearly200facultiesareworkinghardinourschool.（原文）Ourschoolisverybigandbeautiful.Therearemanytreesaroundourschool.Ourschoolhasaverybiglibrary.weoftenreadbooksi

11、nit.Twoteachingbuildingsandabigplaygroundareinourschool.（修改）Ourcampusisfairlybigandbeautiful,aroundwhicharemanytrees,inwhicharealargeplayground,ahugelibrarywhereweoftenreadbooksandtwoteachingbuildings.（原文）Theteachersinourschoolareverykind.Thestudentsareaskedverystrictlybytheirteachers.butthestudents

12、admiretheirteachersveryverymuch.(110字）（修改）Theteachersinourschoolareverykind,butthestudentsarerequiredverystrictlybyourteachers,andthestudentsdohonortheirteachersverymuch.(共107字）总结小语我们不能为了长句子而刻意书写与全文衔接不紧的长句子，而应是在书写完全文后，修改2-3个与全文连接顺畅的长句子，替换3-4个高级词汇。牢记基本要求！扩展阅读：职高英语作文背诵范文职高英语范文职高英语范文（二）一、Greatchangesin

13、myhometownMorethantwentyyearsago,myhometownwasjustasmall,oldandpoortown.Mostofpeoplewerefarmers.Therewerefewfactories.Thepeopledidnthaveenoughfoodtoeatandworeoldclothes.Theyhadahardlife.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinthepasttwentyyears.Thepeoplehavefoundalotofwaysofmakingmoney.Nowtherearemanytallbuildi

14、ngs.Theyareverybeautiful.Roadsarewideandclean.Peoplecantakebusesordrivetheirowncarstogotowork.Manypeoplehavecellphonesandpersonalcomputers.Peopleslivingconditionshaveimprovedalot.Thankstothegovernmentsefforts.myhometownisbecomingmoreandmorebeautiful.二、SavetheearthHowtoprotecttheenvironmenthasbecomeo

15、neofthebiggestproblemsintheworld.Itsourdutytoprotectourenvironment.Nomatterwherewelive,weshoulddosomethingtokeepourneighborhoodcleanandtidy.Wecancollectwastepaperorotherwastethingsforrecycling.Weshouldplantmoretreesandweshouldpreventthosefactoriesfrompouringwastewaterintorivers,lakesandfields.Weshou

16、ldntleaverubbisheverywhereandspitinpublicplaces.Wemustntpicktheflowersorsteponthegrassinpublic.Ifeveryonetrieshisbesttoprotecttheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautifulandourlifewillbebetterandbetter.三、ImproveourenvironmentGoodenvironmentcanmakepeoplefeelhappy.Toimprovetheenvironmentmeanstoq

17、ualifyourlife.Whatshouldwedotoimproveourenvironment?Weshouldplantmoretrees.Andweshouldpreventthosefactoriesfrompouringwastewaterintorivers,lakesandfields.Wheneverweseelitterontheground,weshouldpickitupandthrowitintoadustbin.Dontspitinpublicplaces.Dontdrawonpublicwalls.Itsourdutytokeepourearthcleanan

18、dtidy.四、PollutionaroundusInrecentyearsourlifeisbecomingbetterandbetter.Butourenvironmentisbecomingworseandworse.Itsverybadforourlife.Nowmanypeoplehaveair-conditionersandcars,theyproduce(giveoff)wastegas.Moreandmoretreesare职高英语范文beingcutdown.Therearesomuchsandontheearth(leavingonlysand).Weoftenseefac

19、toriespourwasteintoriversorlakes.Waterintheriverisquitedirty.Wehaventenoughcleanwatertodrinkincities.Nowweareindanger.Itsverynecessaryandimportanttoprotecttheenvironmentwell.Ithinkifeveryonetrieshisbesttoprotecttheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful,andourlifewillbebetterandbetter.五、Make

20、ourworldmorebeautiful!Protectingtheenvironmentisbecomingmoreandmoreimportanttohumans.Itsourdutytotakecareofthenaturearoundus.Animalsandplantsareourbestfriends.,andweshouldsharetheworldwiththem.Weshouldntkillwildanimals,andwemustprotectforestsbecausetheyareanimalshome.Wemustplantmoretreesandgrass,the

21、ycanmaketheworldgreener.Themorebeautifultheworldis,thehappierliveswewillhave.Letsdoourbesttomaketheworldbeautiful.六、KeepourschoolcleanWearestudyinginthisschool.Itisourdutytokeepitcleanandtidy.Itisnotgoodtospitinpublicplaces,suchasinthelibrary,intheclass.Weshouldntleaverubbishhereandthere.Dontdrawpic

22、turesonthewall,theyinfluencethelookofourschool.Weshouldkeeptheclassroomcleanandtidy.Andweshoulddosomecleaningoften.Ifeveryonetrieshisbesttodosomethingusefulforourschool,Imsureourschoolwillbemorebeautiful.七、MycountrylifeIliketoliveinthecountryside.Iliveinasmallvillage.Thereisarivernearit.Lotsoftreesa

23、rearoundmyhouse.Icanseealotoffarmsandbirds.Thereislessnoise.Theairhereiscleanerandfresher.Therearefewercars.Ireadaloudearlyinthemorning.Whenitisgettingdark,themoonisbrightinthesky.Itsveryquiet.WhataniceplaceIlivein!八、HowtolearnEnglishwellAsweknow,Englishhasbecomeaninternationallanguage.Itismorepopul

24、arthananyotherlanguageinChina.Englishiswidelyspokenintheworldanditisthemostusefullanguagearoundtheworld.Buthowtolearnitwell?Thebestwayistouseitallthetime.IfwecantalkinEnglish,thinkinEnglishwecanlearnitwell.Atschool,weshouldlearntohear,speak,readandwritecarefully.WeshouldspendenoughtimeinpracticingEn

25、glish.IfwekeeponworkinghardatEnglish,wewillbeabletobegoodatitoneday.九、HowIlearnEnglish职高英语范文Hello,everyone.ItismyhonortotalkwithallofyouabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.IlikeEnglishverymuch.Ialwayspreviewandmasterthemainideaofthelessonbeforeclass.Inclass,Ilistencarefully,speakloudlyandwritecarefullyandtak

26、enotesifnecessary.Afterclass,Idomyhomeworkcarefully.IwatchEnglishmoviesandlistentoEnglishsongs.IhavebookedanEnglishnewspaper.ItsTimesEnglishPost,Icanlearnalotfromit.IamnotafraidofrememberingthenewwordsbecauseImastermanygoodmethods.IhopeyouworkhardatEnglishandmakeprogresseveryday.Thatsall.十、HowIimpro

27、vedmyEnglishWhenIbegantolearnEnglish,Iwaspooratit.Iwasquiteworriedatthattime.LaterI1istenedtotheteacherattentivelyinclass,andmadenotescarefully.IfIhadanyquestion,IaskedmyEnglishteacherormyclassmatesforhelp.EverymorningIreadtheEnglishtextsaloudandlistenedtotheEnglishtapes.Intheevening,afterfinishingm

28、yhomework,IalwaysreadsomeEnglishandmagazines.NowIamoneofthebeststudentsatEnglishinmyclass.十一、TheimportanceofEnglishEnglishisthemostwidelyspokenintheworld.ItsspokenbymostpeopleintheUSA,GreatBritain,Canada,Australia,andNewZealand.Itsalsoverywidelyusedasaforeignlanguageinmanyothercountriesoftheworld.It

29、swidelyusedforbusinessbetweendifferentcountries.MorethanthreequartersoftheinformationontheInternetisinEnglish,too.Itisreallyabridgetosomuchknowledge.Englishisusedbytravellersandbusinesspeoplearoundtheworld.Itsoneoftheworldsmostimportantlanguagesasitissowidelyused.ThatswhymoreandmorepeopleinChinaarei

30、nterestedinlearningEnglish.Englishissousefulthatwemustlearnitwell.Nowletsworkhardatitandseewholearnsitfasterandbetterinourclass.十二、IwanttobeaninventorTVs,telephone,fridges,cars,planes,computersandmanyotherthingsareimportantinventions.Theyhavegreatlychangedourlife.Manypeoplehavetheirideasandwishes.Th

31、eywanttoinventsomenewthingsfortheworld.Iamoneofthem.Iwanttobeaninventorinthefuture,Inventionscanbringfunandhappinesstoourlifeandmakeourdailylifemoreconvenient.Ourlifewillbecomebetterandbetter.NowIamahighschoolstudent.Iwilltrymybesttoworkhardatmylessonstomakemydreamcometrue.职高英语范文十三、Iwanttobeatourgui

32、deIwanttobeatourguidebecauseBeijingwillhostthe202*OlympicGames.TherewillbemanypeopletocometoChinafromallovertheworld.MostofthemdontknowChinese.TheywanttovisitmanyinterestingplacesinChina.Icanbeoneoftheguides.Icanmakemuchmoney,too.HowhappyIwillbe!Sofromnowon,Imuststudyhard.IamgoingtolearnEnglishevery

33、day.Iwilltrymybesttomakeitcometrue.十四、IliketheInternetTheInternetisplayinganimportantpartinourdailylife.Itsveryuseful.IoftensearchtheInternetforsomeinformation.Icanreadthelatestnews,dosomeshopping,andgetallkindsofinformationfromit.IcanalsodownloadtheinformationthatIneedandIcansende-mailsandmaketelep

34、honecallstomyfriendsontheinternet.ThemostimportantthingisthatIamabletostudyallmylessonsontheInternet.TheInternetmakesmylifemoreinterestingandcolorfulandithasawideeffectonmystudyanddailylife.Iliketheinternetverymuch.Howaboutyou/Willyouhaveatry?十五、TheInternetTheInternetisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantto

35、us.Withoutit,wecantdoworkbetter.Wecangoshoppingwithoutgoingoutofourhouses.AndwecanlistentomusicorwatchmoviesontheInternet.Itcanalsohelpalotwithourstudy.Wecanlearnmuchknowledgeondifferentsubjects,andgetinformationassoonaspossible.Butnow,someofuswork,studyorplayontheInternetforlongtime,especiallyforyo

36、ungpeopletoplaycomputergames.Itsbadforoureyesandhealth.IfwemakegooduseoftheInternet,itwillbeourbestfriendsandhelpusalot.十六、ComputerComputerisawonderfulmachine.Itsagreatinventioninmanyyears.Itdevelopsveryquickly.Thesmallestcomputerisasbigasanote-book.Wecallitpocketcomputer.Computerbecomesmoreandmorei

37、mportantinmanyways.Ithastouchedthelivesofeveryone,evenpeopleinfarawayvillages.Ithelpsustodowithallkindsofinformationandwegetknowledgefromit.Itcangiveusalotfun.十七、TheimportanceofwaterOfallthethingsweeatanddrink,wateristhemostimportant.Wecanlivewithoutfoodformanydays,buttwoorthreedayswithoutwater,usua

38、llymakespeopledie.However,notallofpeopleunderstandthis.Theykeepthrowingrubbishintotheriversorlakes.Somefactoriesevenpourwastewaterintotheriver.Asaresult,manyriversandlakeshavebecome职高英语范文sodirtythatthewaterisnolongersafeforpeopletodrink.Letsdoourbesttokeepthewatercleantosaveourselves.十八、WaterWateris

39、veryimportantforourlife.Everydayweusewatertodrink,toocookandtowash.Waterisnecessaryforallplants.Theyneedwatertogrow.Peoplecantlivewithoutwater.Plantswilldiewithoutwater.Itisimportanttoalllivingthings.However,manypeoplepollutelakesandriverswithwastewater,sowemuststopsomepeopleorsomefactoriesfromwasti

40、ngwaterorpollutingwaterandhelpkeepthewaterclean.Atthesametimeweshouldsaveasmuchwateraspossible.十九、IlikesportsIfeelthattakingexerciseisgoodforourhealth.IoftenfelttiredwhenIwasstudyingbefore.FromthistermIkeeponrunningwhenIgetupinthemorning.AfterclassIoftengotoplaybasketballwithmyfriends.NowIfeelmuchbe

41、tterthanbeforeandIneverfeeltiredwhenIamstudyingAndIimprovealotinmylessons.Sopleasetakeexerciseasoftenaspossible.二十、IntroduceyourselfMynameisLiLei.IwasborninFuzhouonDecember15,202*.ImstudyingatYucaiMiddleSchool.IlearnChinese,math,English,physics,chemistry,politics,andsoon.IlikeEnglishbest.Myfavorites

42、portisfootball.Myhobbiesaredrawingandcomputer.Imveryhappytoliveinahappyfamily.Thereare3peopleinmyfamily.Myfatherisadoctor.Mymotherisateacher.Weloveeachotherverymuch.二十一、MybestfriendMybestfriendis-Heis15yearsold.Wearebothinthesameclass.Heworksveryhard.Heisneverlateforschoolandhedoeswellinallhislesson

43、s.Heisalwaysreadytohelpothers.Mymathisverypoor,soheoftenhelpsmewithmymathafterclass.Hisparentsarebothteachers.Theyareverybusy,soheoftenhelpsdothehouseworkathome.Heisalittleshorterthanmebutheisverystrong.Helikesplayingfootballverymuchatschool.Weoftenplayfootballtogetherandheplaysitprettywell.Hegetsonwellwithus.Everyoneinourclasslikeshim.第 14 页 共 14 页