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1、2022年实用的英语高中作文汇编5篇好用的英语中学作文汇编5篇 在平平淡淡的学习、工作、生活中，大家都常常接触到作文吧，作文是经过人的思想考虑和语言组织，通过文字来表达一个主题意义的记叙方法。写起作文来就毫无头绪？下面是我整理的英语中学作文5篇，希望对大家有所帮助。 英语中学作文 篇1摘要：本探讨考察了中学学生英语作文中人称、指示和比较三种指称连接手段的运用状况。探讨发觉中学生英语作文中以上三种指称连接在运用上存在许多问题及错误。本文具体分析了中学生英语作文中指称连接不恰当运用的缘由，并由此针对改善中学写作教学、提高学生写作质量提出了建议。关键词：人称指称；指示指称；比较指称一、引言Halli

2、day和Hasan（1976）认为，连接是关系到语篇连贯的一个必要条件。本文在Halliday与Hasan的连接理论以及对连接手段分类的基础上，对中学生英语作文中指称连接的运用状况进行了分析，同时深化探讨了导致学生指称连接不恰当运用的缘由，旨在帮助学生加强连接手段运用的意识。同时，也有利于促进中学生的英语写作教学，提高学生的写作质量。二、理论基础Halliday和Hasan将指称连接分为人称指称、指示指称和比较指称这三类，本文将基于此分类方法进行探讨。一）人称指称人称指称是运用话语情景中的功能、通过人称类别表现的指称。人称代词、全部格形容词和全部格代词均包含在人称指称的范畴之内。二）指示指称指

3、示指称基本上是一种用词语指示的形式。指示指称主要包括副词指示代词以及名词性指示代词以及定冠词the。三）比较指称比较指称可以分为一般比较和特别比较两大类。一般比较仅指相像和不相像方面的比较，即比较双方可以是相同、相像或不同。特别比较指的是量或质方面的比较。量一般指数量，质的比较也由比较级形容词和副词表示。三、探讨方法一）探讨问题本探讨主要分析中学生英语作文中指称连接在运用上存在的问题，同时探讨其缘由，旨在给中学英语写作教学供应一些参考。二）探讨对象及语料搜集本次探讨以烟台一中高二学生为探讨对象，要求学生完成一篇120字左右的英语争论文，题目为“Gap Year”，从学生完成的有效作文中随机抽取

4、了60份。分析了学生英语作文中各类指称连接运用存在的问题，并深化探究其缘由。三）统计分析方法根据指称连接的以上分类，分别统计学生每一篇作文中人称指称、指示指称和比较指称的数目。同时，分辨出样本作文中以上三类连接的运用错误，并且统计出各自数目，深化探讨造成这些连接错误的缘由。四、探讨结果与探讨一）指称连接分布状况分析表4.1表明白抽取的60份高二学生样本作文中这三类指称连接及其错误的分布状况。从表中统计数据可以看出，在各类指称连接中，人称指称运用的最为频繁，次数达到了471次，比例为58.36%；指示指称次之，次数为264次，比例为32.84%；比较指称的运用频率要远远低于前两者，样本作文中比较

5、指称的运用次数只有72次，比例仅为8.92%。从表中可以看出，样本作文中人称指称的运用次数要远远超出指示指称和比较指称的运用次数。此现象可以从以下几个方面来进行分析。第一，这篇文章是说明文和争论文的结合，所以许多时候须要学生对gap year进行描述并且就学生是否进行 gap year发表观点。所以学生在写作时大量地运用了人称指称去描述这一现象或者发表自己的观点，因此在样本作文中人称指称运用频率很高。其次，由于文章题材的关系以及文章内容的限制，所以学生在写作时较少地运用了表示相同、相像、不同、表示比较以及表示数量的比较指称。二）指称错误及其缘由分析通过表4.1的统计数据可以看出，学生在指称连接

6、的运用上存在许多错误。通过分析样本作文发觉，学生在写作中所犯的指称错误详细表现为以下四类：1. 人称代词不连续、切换频繁学生常常会潜意识地把单数指称代词切换到复数指称代词，把第一人称代词切换到其次人称代词。这种不连续的、前后不一样的人称代词会让读者感到混淆。例1：Taking a gap year is popular with American students， it offers students some opportunities to earn money， and they can help us get more social experience.這种人称代词不连续的现象的产

7、生可能是由于写作时学生心情比较惊慌，或者是由于学生比较马虎而造成的。假如学生能够细致检查他们的作文，这些人称代词的错误大部分都是可以被发觉并且改正的；另一方面，学生母语的影响也使得学生频繁切换人称代词，因为写作时他们可能是在逐字地把脑海中的中文翻译成英文。例2：I believe that all of you will benefit a lot from taking a gap year.2. 定冠词the的过度运用在指示指称部分，样本作文中出现的最多的指示指称项目就是定冠词the。朱叶秋（20xx）发觉，中国学生在三类冠词的运用中都会出现不同的错误，包括定冠词的过度运用。周保国（20x

8、x）则认为，低水平英语学习者定冠词误用要多于高水平英语学习者。例3：Thegap year is very usual in western countries for the senior high students.例4：Today， Id like to introduce an interesting cultural phenomenon called the Gap Year.在这两个例句中，定冠词 the都属于过度运用，可以删掉。林佳嫣（20xx）探讨认为，学习者可能会出于交际目的过度运用定冠词来指称首次出现的名词，如运用定冠词为了强调某种情感，或是引出某个话题。例5：In we

9、stern countries， some students choose to have a gap year between the graduation of high school and the entrance to college.此句中，学生在graduation of high school和entrance to college前面都误加了定冠词the，可能是因为该生认为中学毕业和进入高校都是特别重要的事。3. 名词性指称项目很少运用此外，学生很少在作文中运用名词性指称项目this和that及其附属形式these和those。鉴于this和that在汉语中没有进行严谨地区分

10、，许多中学学生没有精确驾驭this和that的用法，而选择不去运用它们。黄灿和罗辉（20xx）认为，学生喜爱运用定冠词the来替代this和that，这是因为定冠词the同样可以用来充当指示指称，学生在写作时运用the可以不用费劲来推敲某个地方究竟该用this还是该用that。这些错误基本上是受母语影响造成。例6：In the western countries， some students can relax for a whole year without going to school after high school graduation.例7：Besides， the measur

11、e lets them be their own masters and leads to a meaningful life.4. 比较指称运用单一探讨发觉，中学生在写作中不太喜爱用比较指称，而且比较指称的运用也比较单一。由于中学生英语水平的限制，他们对于要求相对较高的比较指称词汇运用还不够自如，为了避开错误，他们会有意识地避开此类单词的运用。即使写作过程中须要用到此类词汇时，他们也会选择相对比较简洁的一些词汇来表达自己的观点。就一般比较指称而言，学生在样本作文中运用的较多的一般比较指称就是单词different，用来形容参与间隔年的学生可以参与的不同活动或者获得的不同体验。例8：Trave

12、ling to different places also contributes to improving their communication skills and make them more confident to talk with people.而在特别比较指称方面，学生在作文中频繁地运用了单词more，用来进行数量和性质上的比较。例9：During this gap year， some students work as volunteers to know more about the society and gain more experience for their f

13、uture life.此外，学生在样本作文中还大量地运用了more and more这一搭配，这也是造成样本作文中特别指称项目“more”大量运用的缘由。例10：Nowadays， confronted with more and more challenges in society， many students choose to spend an extra year experiencing life instead of coming into the university immediately.五、結论通过以上分析可以看出，中学学生英语作文中指称连接的运用上存在许多问题，这些指称连

14、接的不当运用主要可以归纳为学生母语负迁移的影响，学生在写作时缺乏连接意识和语篇意识以及英语老师在写作教学中过多地强调语法和句型，脱离语境进行写作教学。因此，英语老师在教学中应当尽力帮助学生克服母语负迁移带来的影响，在写作教学中有效地引入连接理论，在平常的英语教学中有意识地培育学生的连接意识和语篇意识，提高英语写作教学的效果，改善学生的英语写作质量。参考文献1 Halliday， M. A. K. &Hasan， R. Cohesion in English M. 1976，London： Longman.2 黄灿、罗辉.指称理论在英语写作中的应用探讨J. 蚌埠学院学报， 20xx（5）：103

15、-106.3 朱叶秋. 高校生英语冠词驾驭状况调查J. 外语教学与探讨， 20xx（3）：206-9.4 周保国. 其次语言习得中英语定冠词过度运用探讨J. 现代外语， 20xx（11）：387-394.5 张玲英. 中美高校生英语争论文中语篇连接手段对比分析D. 北京：北京林业高校，20xx.英语中学作文 篇2Everyone expects to succeed in whatever he/she does. Unfortunately no one is always successful in all his / her life, not even such great peopl

16、e as Marx, Mao, Madam Currie and Einstein.Different people hold different attitudes towards failure. Some people become discouraged and are even defeated by failure, while some other people learn lessons from, failure and continue their efforts.There is no denying that failure is a bad thing, but Ba

17、d things can turn to good things. It all depends on how we deal with it. If we are pessimistic, we will lose heart. If we are optimistic, we will see hope. I really have sympathy for those who, being badly hurt by failure, lose self confidence and confidence in life. However, I have even greater adm

18、iration for those who, being stimulated by failure, go on straight forward to achieve success.I believe in the saying Failure is the mother of success. If I fail, I will try again, If I fail again. I will try and try again.英语中学作文 篇3一、与报社等探讨稿（带手机利弊）Dear Editor:引出话题 Im a senior three student. Im writi

19、ng to tell you my opinion on whethermiddle school students can go to school with mobile phones. 赞成I think they can do that. Because students can keep in touch with their friends and family wherever they are. Besides, the mobile phone is a way to have fun.反对 However, every coin has 2 sides. There are

20、 some problems with using mobile phones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom.Another students is that some students can spend too much time and money on phone calls and sending messages.个人观点 In conclusion, I suggest students not use phones in the classroom. Also, as

21、 it is expensive, the owner should take good care of it.Yours sincerely,Li Hua二、看比照表格写调查报告（孩子出国利弊）调查内容 A survey is taken onpublic opinions of the fact that many parents spend a large amount of money sending their children to study abroad, some of whom are middle school students.调查结果From it we can se

22、e that 38 percent of those surveyed think it is worth the money letting children study abroad to get a better education so that they can get pay in return in the futureHowever, not all are for it / some are against it. 62% of them hold the view that it is difficult for young people to live and study

23、 in a foreign country. Its easy for them to fall / get into some bad habits and the cost of education in another country is ten times as much as that at home.解决措施The survey shows thatthe government should set up different kinds of schools to meet the demands of different children. (句型do something /t

24、ake measures / steps about sth.to do sth)三、读柱状图表写调查报告 留意句式变换Middle school students have some ideas about their future jobs.The most striking contrast isin teaching: 30percent of the girls would like to become teachers while only 5percent of the boys want to do the job. 20 percent of the boys want to

25、 do business and another 20 percent want to become lawyers, while girls make up 15 percent in these two fields. What boys like to do most is to become managers and the second largest group would like to be scientists.Besides teaching, the second choice for girlsisto be scientists and managers. The n

26、umber is not small. Girls also expect to show their abilities in these two fields.四、写信（过去/现在对比）Dear editor,Im a middle school student.I once had a very happy family, but everything has changed because of my father.He used to be a very good doctor and was often praised by his patients. He took good c

27、are of the family and shared the housework with my mother everyday.However, he is now quite a different person. He plays mahjong all night and often quarrels with my mother. I just cant concentrate on my studies and my grades are coming down. Im very much worried and Im afraid it will destroy my fam

28、ily as well as my fatherCould you help me what to do? Im looking forward to your reply. Thank you very much.Li Hua英语中学作文 篇4Most of us have found, some with difficulty, that our sexual feelings contribute beautifully and significantly to our lives if we treat them with respect and if we keep them in

29、reasonable control.We hurt ourselves and others when we treat these feelings scornfully or express them without consideration of others. Briefly, if we treat our own sexual feelings with both respect and control, our lives will be reasonably satisfactory with respect to love and sex.Furthermore, we

30、can more easily teach our children sexual expression with responsibility.英语中学作文 篇5Ching Ming festival is a traditional Chinese festival, has a history of two thousand five hundred years; Its main traditional cultural activities are: grave, outing, cockfighting, swing, play mat, pull hook, tug-of-war

31、), etc. The members (the grave), is very old. Tomb-sweeping day, as a traditional culture, it is a full of mysterious colorific festival, on this day, the pedestrians on the road are missing people who died, to express their respect and grief!Ching Ming festival, in hainan many locals call it the qi

32、ngming festival. Middle age the qingming festival is very important, if not as a legal holiday, they will also take time to go home qingming festival. This suggests that the qingming festival has become a culture, become a man of the late express a way of missing loved ones.Qingming festival, is a k

33、ind of Chinese traditional culture recognition and respect. Qingming festival is very important in the ancient tradition of a festival, is also the most important festival of festivals, was the day of ancestor worship and the grave. This grave, the shrine of the dead an activity. The han nationality

34、 and some minority are mostly in the tombs. According to the old tradition, the grave, people to carry goods such as especially fruit, paper money to the grave, will be food for offering in the family tomb, then paper incineration, new soil up to the grave, fold a few branches pale green branches ed

35、 in the grave, and then salute kowtow worship, finally eat especially home. The tang dynasty poet tu mus poem qingming : rains fall heavily as qingming comes, and passers-by with lowered spirits go. Restaurant where? Boy pointed apricot blossom village. Write the tomb-sweeping day is special atmosph

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